A Mute Promise #MicroFiction

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She stood mourning shedding her silent tears next to her dead master, her only human companion.

  Amy grieved and looked for clues around.

 She drowned in agony, holding revenge in eyes, she made her mute promise to tear the  slayer into pieces.

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  1. AnonymousJune 10, 2015 at 6:37 PM

    So loyal! And death avenging!

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  2. Rashmi KarthikJune 11, 2015 at 5:17 AM

    Thank you:)

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  3. UnknownJune 11, 2015 at 6:55 AM

    A story that truly portrays man's best friend...loyal to the end and beyond.

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  4. Rashmi KarthikJune 11, 2015 at 8:46 AM

    Hi Kathy. I conquer to your words.They are best and loyal till the end:)

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  5. Christine HanolsyJune 11, 2015 at 9:02 AM

    Makes me wonder what exactly happened to the master - there's so much hidden there.

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  6. Rashmi KarthikJune 11, 2015 at 9:41 AM

    Yes Christine. Since it was only 42 words, I could not reveal the mystery behind master's death.

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  7. AnonymousJune 11, 2015 at 4:50 PM

    Kinda reminds me of 101 Dalmations... I don't know why. You did a really god job though!

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