Thursday, June 4, 2015

A Re-visit

     PHOTO PROMPT – © C. Hase

As i place every step on sand, I recall that day when every pebble screamed curse, 

every wave turned rough, clouds chased chaos, sea devoid of calmth, breeze hit me  hard 

just like your words and my heart bled with pain and insult.A broken heart lay buried

under these sands few years ago. On a day,when every one celebrated love with their

valentine, you left me like a love destitute.Walking this path, every year,I revisit the 

strength and  pride in me for moving on in life, falling in love again,with myself than

 a wrong choice. 


  1. Falling in love with oneself is a great plan. Nicely done.

  2. very nice, this ties back to your

  3. Dear Rashmi,

    Sad story with a hopeful ending. A word of crit.."calmth" is not a word in the English language.



  4. This is a great take on the prompt, gaining strength from despair and revisiting the victory.


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