~Quest in the Alien World

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PHOTO PROMPT – © Kent Bonham

Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100


Two bags of hefty luggage and a ton of emotions she carried as she arrived at the railway station of  a strange place that seemed like an alien planet. 


 The night had fallen already and the battery of her trusted phone was dying out. 

 She stood clueless and frightened thinking where to go.  She did not know the local language either.She loosened her fingers to look into the photo again.

 It was the only clue she had in which Saleem stood posing in front of a store .He had been missing and Nadira was determined to find her love.

 Written for Friday Fictioneers:Picture Prompt# June 26




Comments

  1. UnknownJune 27, 2015 at 12:55 AM

    Her desperation is tangible in this piece. A beautifully written sad tale.

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  2. Vinay Leo R.June 27, 2015 at 10:39 AM

    Hope she finds him soon. I'd not bother with so much luggage though. Nicely woven.

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    1. Rashmi KarthikJune 28, 2015 at 11:37 AM

      Thanks a lot Vinay:) I like your honest comments.

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  3. Yolanda RenéeJune 27, 2015 at 7:54 PM

    At least she had a photograph. I hope she finds him, and the ending isn't a sad one. Well done!

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  4. Gah LearnerJune 28, 2015 at 3:09 PM

    She is a determined woman, I hope she finds him. He's lucky to have her. Great story.

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  5. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsJune 29, 2015 at 7:40 AM

    Dear Rashmi,

    Hope she finds him.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. UnknownJune 29, 2015 at 11:18 AM

    goosebumps :) Nice story. super Rashmi.

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