Friday, June 26, 2015

~Quest in the Alien World


PHOTO PROMPT – © Kent Bonham

Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100


Two bags of hefty luggage and a ton of emotions she carried as she arrived at the railway station of  a strange place that seemed like an alien planet. 


The night had fallen already and the battery of her trusted phone was dying out. 

She stood clueless and frightened thinking where to go.  She did not know the local language either.She loosened her fingers to look into the photo again.

It was the only clue she had in which Saleem stood posing in front of a store .He had been missing and Nadira was determined to find her love.

Written for Friday Fictioneers:Picture Prompt# June 26






9 comments:

  1. Her desperation is tangible in this piece. A beautifully written sad tale.

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  2. Hope she finds him soon. I'd not bother with so much luggage though. Nicely woven.

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    1. Thanks a lot Vinay:) I like your honest comments.

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  3. At least she had a photograph. I hope she finds him, and the ending isn't a sad one. Well done!

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    1. Hey Yolanda. Thanks for visiting my blog:)

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  4. She is a determined woman, I hope she finds him. He's lucky to have her. Great story.

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  5. Dear Rashmi,

    Hope she finds him.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. goosebumps :) Nice story. super Rashmi.

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